There are many reasons why I would like to go to (Any university). On my visit, I liked the campus and I met some great people. I also feel that (Any university) is a good school for me because it surrounds me with people with the same interests and goals as myself.

I have been a hockey player since I was six years old, and it has become part of my life. While attending (Any university), I would like to continue playing, so this is another reason why I am hoping to be accepted here. Besides all the experience with teammates, all the ups and downs, I feel that playing for winning and losing teams has shaped me into a

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Approximate Word count = 448
Approximate Pages = 2 (250 words per page double spaced)