This essay is excerpted from a piece called "Manwatching", and is a smaller part of a bigger project. It is an informal essay. It is a very clean, polished piece of work. Mechanically, it is very sound. Morris begins by explaining the three sub

The only other flaw I see in his essay is the length. It is quite a wordy essay. His essay is spread over five pages and twenty-two paragraphs. I think he could've condensed his essay and made it a little more brief. Long essays tend to bore a reader and make them lose focus or attention. Yet overall, his essay is a very good one. Morris gives sufficient evidence to enforce his main idea, and presents it in a very well organized, matter of fact manner.

Essays are more sound when good examples are presented. It gives the reader something that they can relate to. Morris uses many appropriate examples in his writing. Every idea he presents is accommodated with a real life example. His examples are detailed and given in depth. They also tie in

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Approximate Word count = 519
Approximate Pages = 2 (250 words per page double spaced)