My Dad who can do much more than stop bullies, also possesses many skills that enable him to fix just about anything he can get his hands on. Our house, which used to look old and outdated, now looks like a brand new home because of all m

In the previous paragraphs I have explained all of the great qualities my father posses. These great attributes that he posses have helped him shape me into the fine young man that I am. I have learned a great deal from my father, such as hard work and how it pays of in the long run. Another attribute he has installed in me has been the importance of good manners and getting along with all types of people because you never know when you might need them again. Finally, my father has instilled some great values in me, but his greatest value to me has been letting me be my own person.

In addition to my father's job with Hubbell, he is involved with our subdivision and my hockey team. This shows how much my Dad actually does for me. After working as much as he does to pay for all the things that I participate in he still took the time to be my hockey coach for ten years. I want to become a strong figure in my children's lives like my father has been in mine. My mom always tells me, "Your just like your father." Sometimes she even means it as a go

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Approximate Word count = 714
Approximate Pages = 3 (250 words per page double spaced)