Private School vs Public School

Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience that private schools offer a better education

to children and better prepare them for college.

Thesis Statement: Private school children are more involved in community service, are

generally provided with a better education, and are more likely to

apply and succeed in college.

Attention material: For many of us, as scary as it may seem, the pitter-patter of little

feet is not too far off. In fact, some of you may already hear it. But along with

it, comes many big decisions that will affect the future of your children.

Education is a big example. Now you may say, “Of course I’m going to educate

my children.” But the big question is “Where?” For many parents today, it is a

hard to decide where to send their children - Public or Private school?

Credibility material: I myself went to public schools, and even though I graduated

Valedictorian of my class, when I came to college, I did not feel I was prepared

in many area of education. The classes

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Approximate Word count = 986
Approximate Pages = 4 (250 words per page double spaced)