When the plane landed, two large men wearing black suits picked me up. I found this somewhat interesting, along with a slight feeling of fear. After being escorted through the airport, we arrived at a white van where I then sat for the next five hours while we drove to the middle of nowhere. Once arriving at this dystopia, I had then realized I had made a horrible mistake. Numerous kids walking around in bright orange suits gave me this first clue. I would later find tha

After about three months of keeping my nose clean, my best friend Sennecca offered to send me a package. I wearily accepted, knowing that the contents would most likely get me into trouble. Sure enough, my streak was ruined when my supposed best friend, who knew how the system worked, sent me a carton of cigarettes concealed in a pillow. I was soon uncloaked and received my punishment by becoming level one. This was the lowest level you could possibly be, similar to dirt. I then had to work every day from three in the afternoon till about ten at night. Then on my weekend mornings I had to wake up at exactly five in the morning to do a three hour-long workout, followed by a ten-mile hike. Let me tell you about fun, hike ten miles up a mountain in the blistering cold with snow up to your knees.

I remember having a fever during the time I was level one; this meant I would have to complete a workout while being extremely sick. I remember going to the nurse the night before and telling her, "I don't think I will make it if you guys make me workout." I then remember her replying, "Well then we would have one less kid, wouldn't we." I then went to my room and prepared for the horrible travail I was about to encounter. I then took my temperature, reading one hundred and one, and went to bed. I soon woke up to, "Morning pansies, rise and shine!" When the work out began, I instantly knew I wasn't going to make it. When I was going up on my thirty-second pushup, I collapsed. This wouldn't have been so bad if this had only affected me. "What have we got here," Tom bellowed. "Let's start back at number ten," Tom screamed. "Everyone say thank you Tom," I hear. "Thank you Tom," a mellow echo filled the room. I was awaiting the beating I would receive after the workout. I knew my peers would be more then willing to show their gratitude for the extra work I had brought upon them.

t this was the beginning of the end.

I then was stuck in this losers

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