The improvements that definitely need to be made are being worked on throughout our society. The violence in our schools is a major problem that needs to be addressed. Most people blame video games or music lyrics for corrupting the young minds and turning them into violent criminals. I feel that the parents of these children are where the blame should actually be focused. The parents should pay more attention to the lives' of their children.

The changes proposed by Grant Fjermedal in his short story, Artificial Intelligence, are not even close to being good ideas. I could not believe that a person could actually come up with the insane ideas that Fjermedal did. He feels that we should all let a robot surgeon scan our brains, and turn ou

Aldous Huxley also feels that humanity needs to be changed in his short story, conditioning the Children. In this story, a doctor shows an experiment that electrically shocks innocent babies if they touch roses, and blazes sirens and bells in the babies' ears if they look at the books, which he set up in the middle of an empty room. This seems very cruel and unusual. Huxley gives the idea that it is a good way to get people to behave the way that their elders feel they should. That takes away from the freedom of thought from the babies. It teaches them false lessons that will affect them for the rest of their lives. What is wrong with books and roses in the first place? Absolutely nothing. There is no reason for taking these items away from the babies in the first place, and Huxley gives no explanation for the idea of taking them away.

Both Fjermedal and Huxley have their own ideas about improvements that they feel need to be made to humanity. They think that by making these changes, they will improve our society greatly. Both authors presented outrageous ideas that I feel would hurt our society a lot more tha

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