I slowly moved toward the sound being careful not to get caught in the flames. The smoke was choking me. I could see an outline of a face across from me. It was Jaden, my best friend. He was completely surrounded by the bright orange flames.

"Yeah, but the fire has me surrounded!"

I hit the water with a crash. I swam through the water around the boat that was covered in flames to find Jaden.

"Yeah the flames were everywhere and I wasn't sure what to do. I was so scared."

"I would have been to. You did a smart thing by jumping though."

Finally we were beside each other jumping the waves like we were walking on the moon. We seen a large board that would support our weight, so we swam over to it. When we got onto the board we started to circle the destroyed boat that was covered in flames. I began to feel my stomach move in circles because of all the smoke I was b

"Okay, when I say go, lets run as fast as we possibly can."

"Jaden you can! On three....one, two, three...GOOO!!!!"

I went to room 574 and knocked on the door. "Wow! I blared. When Katie opened the door she looked so pretty. "Is that a good wow?" she asked. "Oh yeah, it's a really good wow. You look beautiful." "Thank you Mitch you look nice yourself. "Ready to go?" "Yes I am." "All right let's go." I reached and took her hand. We walked side by side down the hall. I kept turning my head and looking at her. I couldn't believe how beautiful she looked. "I was thinking we could go to a club until it gets dark and then when it does we could go catch the fireworks." "That sounds good to me. But can you dance?" she asked. I let out a little laugh "can I dance, yeah I can dance and I can sing too." "Oh really, you never told me that." "Theres a lot you don't know."

We hurried but, it was like a kind of death run where you know your doomed. The panther was right behind us, it's claws tearing up our foot prints as we ran. One wrong move and we'd be lunch.

"Thanks you saved my life." "Your welcome, but what are you doing on this island?" she asked. "Long story, what are you doing here?" "I'm on vacation here, what else would I be doing here?" I gave her a confused look. "Mitch you are in the Caribbeans just on the wrong side of the island." "I'm what.... Jaden and I looked all over this island and we did not see any people." "Ok Mitch you are confusing me." "My friend Jaden and I got washed ashore here. Our boat caught on fire and blew up and then we ended up here. We looked around this whole island and we did not see any signs of life." "Well it's a big island, if you like I'll take you back to where I'm staying and we can get those burns looked at." "Um yeah, sure, whatever."

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Approximate Word count = 4756
Approximate Pages = 19 (250 words per page double spaced)