Not understanding that he needed a ticket to get, and that the building didn't open for another hour, he sat there and argued with the man about how he should be let in right now. Well the man eventually calmed my friend down. But sent him to a checkpoint, which is a way, to detour people that the doormen feel should not be in the rave. Any way I was volunteered next to go up to the man after my friend drove off.

"So," I said, "here's my ticket when can I get in?" He explained that this building would not open for an hour and that we best drive around for an hour or so. I went back to car and told about how we were too early. They agreed that we should drive around for a while. As we drove around I saw my friend driving around. He p

So we went do the gas station, the only thing open past nine in Florida, and got some snacks and drove around some more. We got on the Florida turnpike and got stuck on there for about an hour and a half. We couldn't find enough money in his car to pass to toll booths so we had to get our car over a huge ditch and past all the wonderful wildlife lurking in the creeks and swamps that surround the turnpike. So my friend decided that we would jump the small ditch and four wheel it to the mail road. This went well as planned but his car was a mess after going though the whole trouble of jumping a small ditch.

"This is the best night of my life," I thought as Ginger invited me back to her house for the rest of the night. This was it there was no question this was how I wanted to spend my weekends and my summer. Raves were the best thing that ever happened to me, I was in heaven when I was in a rave, but I didn't fit in went I went. That's why I say it was a turning point because Raves are the reason I started to dress different and act different. This was the new me and I wanted to show it off. I did so by getting parts of pierced and dressing like the average raver. But now that I am back at home my looks are confined to what my

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