Over-Speculation
Developing an accurate definition for the word privacy that applies to everyone could easily be described as a tedious task. A brief overview of the subject suggests that many consumers are being profiled into databases that will enable internet advertising moguls "to give you only the news you want" (Cobb 439). This speculation proves to be reasonable, judging by the fact that it is already occurring. The conflict lies in the further speculations of these advertising techniques. Some say that this method of endorsement will shape a democratic public into a diversity-deprived nation. Others appreciate the convenience, embellish in the hospitality, and welcome the exploitation of further technological advancements. After viewing both point and counterpoint arguments, the justification of the word privacy remains unclear. However, the counterpoint proceeds to gain better credibility through the use of less speculation. Russ Cobb, a graduate student in Spanish at the University of Texas at Austin, introduces an interesting theory regarding the importance of one's ZIP code. Cobb elaborates "by requesting your ZIP code in all online transactions, advertisers are allowed to construct a general profile of your interests" (
Wynar, Roahn. "Counterpoint: Paranoid Privacy Hawks Don't Realize How Good They've Got It." Lunsford et al. 438-40. The counterpoint argument of Roahn Wynar did not require much speculation; rather it used examples and evidence to build support. The most effective piece of Wynar's article was his introduction. The confidence and humor that came off the words "nebulous" and "invasive" give the reader a sense that the author is charismatic. Wynar agrees with Cobb's theory that online information is used to "route appropriate advertising your way, often while you browse" (Wynar 438). Wynar even agrees that every transaction made online puts forth aspects of each individual's personality. However, he feels that companies should be acknowledged for their "observant [...] memories" (Wynar 439). This shows how Wynar believes there might be a positive aspect to having advertisements tailored to the public in private. He uses Amazon.com as an example to back up this claim. A brief anecdote follows about the "unforeseen cultural consequence of Internet commerce" in which Wynar humors his audie! Overall, the two articles were both doused with information. The article written by Russ Cobb started with great evidence, and led to rational speculation. However, the speculation went too far creating a distance between the author and his audience. T
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