I have chosen to write as Ms Carson to the story from page 55-63

This is the sort of piece of writing I was expecting you to write. In my last set of comments I finally worked out that you didn't want to write about various issues. I worked out that you wanted to write about you and what life is like for you and what happens throughout your own life, either in realistic or fictional stories.

You have been writing true stories and also stories that are based around you and your friends and you seem not to want to include your personal names. I encourage you to write more stories, which involve yo

urself, as it can be something that others or you especially can relate to as your stories are based on your life. This could be a good topic to write about later in your folio.

I was also pleased and surprised to see you wrote a dedication piece to Terry Sampson. He sounds as though he has been a true friend to you throughout your friendship. It is pleasing to see you write about things that influence your life either for good or bad as it helps you cope with the real world as you are a fairly emotional person. I would like to see write a piece to Terry to actually let him know how you have appreciated his friendship to you as he seems to be a good person who you should be thankful for.

I like the idea you have come up with about re-writing the Anna and Terry situat

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