Descriptive Writing
The clouds in the sky create a nice cool blanket from the hot sun. I can smell the rain that was once falling. The sound from the cars and the people create a nice little harmony that one could easily lay down and relax to. Not too far off in the distance I see the old softball stadium. And scattered around the park are huge oak trees. I can also see the playground, and the muddy path that the runners take. Now, the clouds are breaking and shinning just a hint of sun into this wonderful picture. The temperature is one that is dreamed of on the hottest and the coldest days. It is not to hot, and it is definitely not to cold. This new sunlight seems to change the color of everything. The grass which was once a forest green has now turned into green. The trees which seemed dark at first, now actually resembles brown bark and green leaves. Even the metal fence that goes around the softball stadium has turned from grey into silver. There seems to be more movement now, and I hear a bird chirp every so often. The sun seems to be playing hide-and-go-seek with the clouds. I could definitely spend all day at this heavenly place.The clouds imprison the sun. The trees, in the breeze, shake like little k
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Some common words found in the essay are:
, positive description, negative description, positive negative, softball stadium, little kids day, shake little kids, positive negative descriptions, sound cars people, cool blanket hot, hot definitely, little kids, cars people, sound cars, reader relate, shake little,
Approximate Word count = 834
Approximate Pages = 3 (250 words per page double spaced)
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