First Kiss
Suffocation can result to light headedness, emotional discomfort, and in extreme cases brain damage. None of which I would relate to a passionate kiss. The air was hot with static on a life changing night. With every step I took currents ran through my body. My elated best friend, Marissa, shook the night with her exuberant smile, almost calming my senses. "You know it's not every night a girl gets her first kiss," she said with a now becoming annoying sparkle in her eye. I begrudgingly turned to her and replied, "I don't know if this is even the night. I don't know if this is even the guy. What if I'm not good? What if all the kissing scenes I've studied won't even help? He's going to think I'm terrible!" She just laughed and said, "It's not a game of skill. Just follow his lead and don't worry, so much!" We quickly hugged and pulled our bathing suits on over our athieticly young fourteen-year-old bodies, and joined the party awaiting us upstairs. We reached the top of the stairs and I looked out to see mounds of bodies lounging all over the front yard. Two large hot tubs engulfed the scruff of lawn and the one car drive. Through the mesh of people I finally spotted Chris. His lean tan body stretched over his
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Some common words found in the essay are:
Marissa Marissa, He's I'm, Oh Lord, , Oh I'm, Marissa I'm, Erika French, i'm comin', hot tub, follow lead, grabbed hand,
Approximate Word count = 1257
Approximate Pages = 5 (250 words per page double spaced)
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