A Night in the Cold
AIt must have been 4 feet long and must have weighed at least 30 lbs. It was one of the slimiest ones we ever caught. The tentacles were almost a foot long and the scales where the size of quarters.@ AYeah right, we believe you, (Paste your name here).@ While my peers were playing video games or hide-and-go-seek, (a friends name) and I were out ether exploring the unknown, or sleeping from staying out all night. None of the students in my sixth grade class Ashow and tell@ believed me when I told them about the unforgettable experiences (a friends name) and I endeavored. To tell the truth, I didnt really want them to believe me. If one of them told my mom what (a friends name) and I did then our little butts would have been grounded for a serious amount of time. The fishing stories that I told where true, all true. (a friends name) and I had gone on many explorations to far off places. We had sneaking out at night down to such an art that if we could put it on paper then it would be more famous then Leonardo da Vinci=s painting, The Last Supper. We would sometimes make dummy bodies that would lie lifeless all night under tightly nitid sheets. The Abig yellow house@ is where we met. From there we would do whatever sounded like the
For when I am 65 years old and am laying in a hospital bed and hear the hart monitor fo from a beep to a hum, I will end my journey to the Big-Bright-Light with the thought of my mom, my dad, my sister, my brother, my wife, and that one special best friend, (a friends name). And maybe, just maybe, I will be able to go fishing in a place and in a time that is oh so familiar once more in a place called haven. Later that night, we had an experience that would excite us for the rest of the night. Howling Coyotes were a normal sound for two in the morning. But hearing them get louder and louder was not. It was almost like a train, at first there is just a quiet hum then the amplitude of the whistle would rise a little bit until eventually the train could be seen. But seeing a train coming is not as bad as seeing a bunch of blood thirsty dogs running full speed at you in the middle of the night. So, our instincts took for a little run. We ran and ran and ran and ran. I was the younger of the two of us and I always told (a friends name) that I was going to live longer then him. As (a friends name) got farther and farther ahead of me, I started to wonder if I would really live longer then him. I learned that it is not always a good idea to think about my self. Just think, I could have been a giant hot dog. My entire body could of been used for a snack. We should all treat others how we wish they would treat us. (a friends name) showed me that he did not only think about himself, he also though of me. If (a friends name) did not help me over the fence then I would have turned into chop-stewy, or more accurately, grade AA@ chop-stewy
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Approximate Word count = 1105
Approximate Pages = 4 (250 words per page double spaced)
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