Cause and effect
Last year, I usually went to work or to school by bus. It was uncomfortable because it took a lot of my time waiting for the bus. So I bought a car since I thought I could drive well. Unfortunately, after a few days, I had a car accident, which has caused problems. Even though this accident happened to me year ago, I still feel like it happened yesterday. First, the right side of my body was hit. My right shoulder seems weak now. I sometimes cannot write long at a time. Also, my right hand is tired every time I write many pages. Moreover, I have to be careful when I turn my neck because it hurts if I turn it quickly. I am losing weight, and I feel my health weaken. Lately, I have a headache on the right side of my head that worries me. I wonder what's wrong with the right side of my body: neck, hand, shoulder, and head.
In general, since I had the car accident, I have had many problems. It has made my health weaker. Furthermore, My car usually gives me trouble. In addition, I have to work more. Hence, I do not have enough time to study or take a rest. I wish it would be better. Whenever I remember what were happened, I am really upset. Anyway, it will pass soon. The last troublesome effect on me is that since I want to buy a new car, I have to work harder to make money. Even though I have to go to school full time, I work two jobs. My first job is in the Language Lab at Montgomery College, which I am attending. While I am working, I can study. The second job is harder. I work as a manicurist on weekends. Therefore, I breathe a lot of chemicals. The most dangerous chemical is the powder that makes up artificial nails. This powder can cause lung can
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Approximate Word count = 565
Approximate Pages = 2 (250 words per page double spaced)
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