We had arrived to the first planet and just by looking at it, it looked like this planet was not going to become our home for long. We got out of the starship just to explore it anyway. We started to walk around on the planet and we felt shaking constantly. I thought it was just constant earthquakes and that they never stopped, but I knew I was wrong when I saw a lot of creatures just running around. I knew they were making the shaking because of the number of creatures. It looked like the creatures where hostile because they were fighting with themselves and with one another. We turned around and walked the other way to a canyon that we had seen as we landed on the planet. This planet was weird, it was very dry and there looked like there was no source of water because of how dry it

As the starship took off I wondered what the next place would be like. I had to stop wondering because we where already about to enter the new atmosphere of the planet we where about to explore. This place looked really nice, but the old saying is, 'Looks can be deceiving.' This place looked like Earth, kind of, it looked like Earth because Earth had beaches and trees and all other features that this planet had. It looked livable but looks can be deceiving.

was. As we looked over the canyon I told my brother Jack, "Look how deep the canyon is, and how steep." He replied, "Yea dude, it looks pretty nasty down there. I think we should just go and tell mom and dad that this place it pretty weird and we can't live here." I agreed with him for once in a long time, so we headed back to the starship to take off. We got back to the ship and those a couple of those creatures we had saw spotted us and came toward us pretty fast. We just went in the starship and didn't turn back. Those creatures ignored us and just turned around and went back with there herd.

There was water here, a lot of water was here, that was crashing up against the sides of the cliff. This place was scary just by looking at it. When my brother and I got out of the ship to start looking around he thought he saw something by the blink of his eye. I told him he was crazy and that he was seeing things. He denied that I knew what he saw. I got a little suspicious when I saw something at the corner of my eye. It looked like something was hunting and that it was surrounding us, getting ready for the attack on us. We went back into the ship and got our laser guns. We went back out and raised the door back up with the remote. We went walking to see if what we saw was for real or if it was just a figment of our imagination. We went behind the rocks and we could hear things but could not see things. We saw something like blushes moving around. It looked as if they were invisible so we just kept on walking to see if we could find any thing else and just to check out the planet. Those blushes started to follow us and whenever we did something quick or fast moving they would jump back quick. It didn't look like those creatures would attack us because they would flinch back whenever we moved quickly. We started in this one direction that they kind of let us to. It was this big cave that was pretty big and there was another creature that we could see. This creature looked like it was an apelike figure or something. This started to become a little scary and my little brother was starting to get scared also. All the invisible creatures where not invisible any more, they all were creatures that were ready to have supper and we were going to be it. My brother was getting really scared now. I whispered to him, "Don't worry. Shoot the apes by the exit of this cave and I will make sure the other apes don't do anything." He did as I told him

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Approximate Pages = 8 (250 words per page double spaced)