Analysis Essay
My friends liked Majesty because he was different from other dogs. His mother, Lisa, was a German Sepherd. One day she ran away to the wood on Lubic Mountain. She came back pregnant. When she gave birth to the puppies, they were bigger than usual puppies. After two weeks they had their ears straight up; only wolf puppies did that. My grandfather knew this, so he took the puppies and Lisa back to the woods and left them, all except Majesty. Majesty had run into the cow shed and stayed there. When Grandfather came back home and saw that he had missed Majesty, he was really mad. He wanted to take Majesty back with other puppies, but I told him not to. I said, I wanted full responsibility over Majesty. Majesty grew really fast. He was a silver color. When he reached his full size, ha was bigger than an ordinary dog and his color was lighter. His ears were straight up in the air, but smaller then German Sheperd ears. My friends knew he was half wolf and kept their dogs away from him. The sun appeared pass through top the tall trees; blue mix white color of the sky cover the whole entire of my eyes, a fresh cool air blew lightly against my face, birds were flying to find its preys, squirrels chasin
The trap was at least seven feet deep, almost twice my height. Surrounding me was four wall of ground. Seemed like I'm about to get burry alive, the smell of the dirty make me feel uncomfortable, smelled nasty of the dead leaves. We tried to get on each other's back, to get out of there. But Sam couldn't keep his back straight with all the weight, so we kept fell back down in the hole. We didn't know what do to and the sun was going down. Rocky said, "Why don't call Majesty?" We all started yelling, but Majesty didn't hear us. My friend, Sam, told me that he had set some traps for rabbits near the wood side. He wanted to check them to see of there was anything. So we went together, when we came near, another friend of mine name Rocky, pulled me by the hand and told me not to move. Straight in front of me was a deer, dark yellow with a tiny white tail and huge ears. he told me to command Majesty to catch the deer, so I did. I didn't have to tell him twice; he was on his way. Majesty chased the deer deep into the woods and we ran after Majesty. Soon majesty was long gone. We were running after him, when out of nowhere, suddenly, we felt we weren't running on the ground. We had fallen into a trap for wild pigs! I remember that I had whistled for Majesty to call him when he was just a puppy, I started blowing on the whistle as hard as I could. After two to three hours, there was nothing. I told them we might have to spend a night in the trap! Ro
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Approximate Word count = 993
Approximate Pages = 4 (250 words per page double spaced)
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