College Essay
I can still remember vividly the last night lying on the beach. The sky was fully strewn with stars and the salty sea breeze gently touched my face. It had been the most meaningful eight days in my life. Now, I・ve become a mature young woman rather than a timid little girl. During my first spring break after I came to America, another International student and I joined a ：kayaking/camping trip； to Baja, California with my science teacher, Bryan. We understood neither ：camping； nor ：kayaking；, and naively thought we would stay in fine hotels for eight days. Ultimately, we realized why we were the ：only two girls； on this trip. However, this unexpected ：accident； has brought the greatest change in my life. I・ve gained the strength to accomplish my goals and the beliefs that develop my values. On an awful windy day, we spent the whole afternoon kayaking to another island. I had pushed the paddle with a great reluctance with my partner・s left-and-right commands. The only thing to do was to paddle, paddle, and PADD
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Approximate Word count = 699
Approximate Pages = 3 (250 words per page double spaced)
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